I am waiting for someone
December 23, 2010 3:51am CST
I am waiting for someone who is willing to enter my life to share my feelings and willing to let me go into her life. I am waiting for someone who is not like me because of something i owned but willing to accept my everything. I am waiting for someone who know that i am not perfect but still love me even appreciate something not perfect. I am waiting for some one who don't care about others appraisal but care more about my affirmation and recognition. I am waiting for someone who who will always stand beside me even the whole world against me,never betray me. When the wind blow,I am waiting When the rain falls,I am waiting I thought you would feel hurt when I standing in the wind lonely I thought you would not be hardhearted enough to see me standing in the rain lonely I thought you would appear and make me away from the rain But disappointed,I can not even see your shadow. But I heard whose voice from far away I want to prevent the wind blow beside you I want to keep the rain away from you. But forgive me I haven't built a solid wall. I haven't made a strong umbrella. Will you still waiting? Is that you? However,I'll still wait. No matter how long it takes, I have no retreat. Thus,while I am waiting, Waiting with my confidence, Waiting in my dreams, Waiting while suffering pain. Waiting while I am nearly desperate. Wainting without regret. How many times the flowers come into bloom and how many times the flowers falls. How many times the leaves turn green and how many times the leaves turn yellow. How many times the rain falls and how many times the snow falls. How many times the grasses turn green and how many times the grasses be yellow. I am still waiting, Waiting silently Waiting patiently Because I believe that finally,you will appear. Yes,I am waiting for someone Someone can let me give up the entire forest for a tree Someone can let me give up the whole garden for a grass. Someone can let me ignore the whole sky for a star Someone can let me give up the whole river for a bottle of water. Yes,I am waiting for someone, Someone can accompany me in a sunny spring morning. Someone can accompany me go flying a kite and make our dreams fly Someone can run into the rain and disregard passers-bys' eyesight when I lose sense of control. Someone will cover me with the coat lightly when the wind in fall begin to blow. Someone willing to accompany me on the bacony even in the cold winter evening when I feel confused. Yes,I am waiting for someone, Someone make me willing to send the only one rose in my life Someone who receive numberous of roses but just accept my rose. Yes,I am waiting for someone Someone who know that I have been through endless waiting and cherish me. Someone who didn't appear in my yesterday but willing to accompany me to go through each today and tomorrow. Yes,I am waiting, I am not sure how long will I keep waiting, Even don't know in which way will she appear in my life, But i am sure, we won't be earlier or later, just meet each other like occeanally I believe in that time we can recognize each other by expression im our eyes. Surely,I am waiting for someone with the time passing I am still waiting for someone Just waiting waiting quietly waiting patiently.
4 people like this
• United States
30 Dec 10
That is a pretty nice poem. Is it autobiographical? If so, I hope that someone is waiting for you in the same way and that you find each other and live happily ever after. It is not an impossible dream. Just do not be lead astray by the glitter of a false relationship and a true one will come to you.
• United States
23 Dec 10
I see many advising for you not to wait too long and I will take the opposing on that as sometimes we must wait for all good things, but we along the way learn when too long is just too long. You information is very lovely, and I so hope you find and get the person of your dreams.
23 Dec 10
Hello auy, I believe every person is destined to meet someone but sometimes waiting can be tiring also, why you don't try to look for someone or make a move instead of waiting? If ever you find her I wish you a happier life together Good Morning :)
24 Dec 10
Yes,maybe I should be move to look for her and always be with her.Thank you for your wishes and I also wish you have a happy life with the one you love. By the way,it is funny,when you say "Good morning"to me,it is in the midnight in my country,haha. Merry Christmas.
• Pamplona, Spain
23 Dec 10
Hiya any, It´s very nice what you have written so expressive. I am sure you will find someone else soon. Just give it time. Time to heal over the other Lady and time to find yourself again. Don´t know when you are going to find her but you surely will sooner or later. Hope you are feeling better now and more relaxed.
28 Dec 10
That's nice. Waiting is a painful process for some, but it's a sweet success for others. Waiting can be boring, but it does bring results at the end of it. Be it good or bad, it's the process that matters most. ONly people whom waited before, will only the enjoyment or pain of it. Waiting is definitely not lonely at all because at the point of waiting, we know that something else is waiting along us too.
24 Dec 10
hi there auyuelin!! c an i ask permission if i can post this to my facebook.. i like what you have wrote and i wish i could share it to my friends..thanks=)) i really thought that what you are waiting for is someone i also im waiting for=))
24 Dec 10
Thank you for your response and maybe we should make a move to find her,but I strongly believe that she will come.There is something we shouldn't impose,maybe we will meet occasionally or by chance, not make a move to look for her on purpose.Thank you for your advices and Merry Christmas.
• Holiday, Florida
23 Dec 10
this is a good poem but not meant for mylot. they usually dont allow poems so i hope they dont delete it, as i wont get paid for replying either. maybe you should try doing a blog or something with this but its really to long for mylot also. just advice from someones been here a long time.
23 Dec 10
Its really beautiful poem Auyuelin!. First I feel its beautiful but when I reads again I feel its kinda sad poem because we all know how waiting can be really frustrating especially like you sad its nearly desperate. But I think its OK if you wanna waited because the best thing in life is worth waiting for. I hope you will meet the one you are waiting for and It will be made you really happy. Merry Christmas and had very great for you. I tell you got talent in writing and you made thats poem really good maybe you can find site to publish it and making money from it. Good luck
8 Jan 11
Hello friend, That was sweet and expressive. I like such deep poems, i would like to make one myself. But, unfortunately my waiting is over. Hehe. You see i was like yourself once until i found her when i was 23. I never had any relationship before than, neither was i desperate to make a girlfriend as i was sure my parents would find the best girl for me. Now i am in a relationship, and i have always wanted someone as sweet as she is. :) Have just friends and don't get into a relationship until you start to have feelings for someone you begin to like. But still wait, just to understand if she was the one whom you were willing to spend your life with. Some people get into temporary relationship consenting each other that they may not be their future, but never ever do that. Just open up your heart to the person who would care about you and love you for the person you are. Happy new year.