Do You Like to Write Poetry??

That is so nice go ahead with this work

Nice poem. I write too and have a small collection. Here is one. DROP THE ATTITUDE Drop the attitude walk with me You will view the world the way I see The flowers the trees will catch your eye To the material world you’ll say goodbye The four legged kind will draw you out Their unceasing love there’s no doubt Your caring heart will try and reach The helpless kind, without a breach. To bond with those that you love and care The struggle forever will be there You will feel the tugs now and then But that will end we don’t know when You need to strive a heart to win It may not be your kith or kin The world is there at your feet A good heart you’re sure to meet. Plan you life plan it well But what’s our future none can tell So be it come what may Sun is shining make your hay Come with me, stop being you You’ll see the world in a different hue The flowers, the trees will catch your eye, To the material world you’ll say goodbye

You have written a nice and touching poem. I loved it. Please carry on with good work. I also sometimes write on some sites.

Very inspiring poem! What I carry away from your poem is: No need to be afraid of the darkness, deal with it for a while and then see what other doors are available. Darkness is not necessarily bad, just an occasion to maybe do something else.

I suppose thresholds are important imageries in poetry. I recall writing a poem for a class in seventh grade and my title was: What is there behind that door? Although my poem was published in our school paper, I couldn't remember the lines now... maybe something like this: [i]I had been living on earth roughly Everyday is filled with suffering and pain But wait!, what is that I see? A door? What is there behind that door? I see! The grace of God is behind that door. For me! [/i] Something like that. The poem lacked real verse and rhyme, very childish, and when it was published, I was . Good thing none of my friends laughed.

That was brilliant buenavida. Your english is superb and dare i say it, better than many english speaking people! including mine as my spelling can be rank rotten! You must keep uo the poetry as that was beautiful. You write with an amazingly warm undercurrent. I look forward to hearing more in the future.

I have write a few poems,on triond and i get a lot of view.This is a wonderful poem, i like it a lot.Yes i like poetry a lot am a writter my self an i enjoy writing,the only thing i hate is typing it up lol. But this is a beautiful piece,keep on doing what you doing.And you can submit them to triond an get pay for them.

I have enjoyed writing poetry since I was introduced to it in a high school english class. My love for both reading and writing poetry is still inspired even to this day. Poetry is a way for creativity and expression to come alive.

...Hi there buenavida, I love words and I am creative, I also paint as you do, so the genes came though from someone long ago. Words are powerful and can be used in many positive ways as well as nergitive ways. Your poem is great and quite inspirational. Here is another of mine that you might enjoy. Please visit www.authspot.com/writers/quiet+ voice.8137 if you are interested in reading more. Thank you. When words become swords, Which pierce your mind, Take yourself away from the pain. Place your very being inside, a Strong, impenetrable, invisable shield.

Good day buenavida, I may say I like poetry, but I guess I lack the talents in writing one.It was a good poem really and inspirational.Just like "have patience and will be rewarded"So we must not lose hope because for every door that closes windows will be opened.happy mylotting

When I was in college and I feel bored, I have a seatmate and a friend who would scribble some poetry on his notebook and I would sometimes read them and really find it amazing. So I was inspired by her and started to right my own poetry. I never thought I could write one but I did. Writing poetry helped me moved on from a heartbreak.

I love writing poems. You can put meanings in your words in a way you couldn't do normally and you can try to activate some feelings in the reader of the poem with just a few words. So in my opinion poems are something very strange in this regard because 2 lines out of a poem can tell you a much longer story then your friends within a few minutes! Unfortunately my english isn't good enough to write some english poems but someday I have improved my English may be wide enough to write some good english poems too. Keep up your good work! (as far as I can tell) ;)

Wow this is so nice.. I feel like i was the one your poem. its just that i never tried opening those doors.. hope one day i will learn and know how to open them..

i love poetry... i love to read it and to write some of my own... though not many ever read those... and by the way i like your poem... it's very nice... your pretty good at writing poetry

I don't know why this isn't allowed but maybe it is because you are not monitoring your discussions?? I dont know though i havn't used mylot in a long time i think that used to get discussions deleted. I used to write poetry when i was a child i havn't done it for a long time but i do like to hear a sweet poem every know and then that touches my heart.

I suppose thresholds are important imageries in poetry. I recall writing a poem for a class in seventh grade and my title was: What is there behind that door? Although my poem was published in our school paper, I couldn't remember the lines now... maybe something like this: [i]I had been living on earth roughly Everyday is filled with suffering and pain But wait!, what is that I see? A door? What is there behind that door? I see! The grace of God is behind that door. For me! [/i] Something like that. The poem lacked real verse and rhyme, very childish, and when it was published, I was . Good thing none of my friends laughed.

Poetry is a great way to express your inner feelings and emotions and what you have written here is really nice and certainly shows that even when someone feels that there is only darkness all around them and things can never get better there is always a light and a way out to a brighter future. Carry on with your good work.