how to write a good passage ?
By bofeng101
@bofeng101 (51)
China
June 22, 2011 3:31am CST
Yesterday we went to a exam ,the teacher asked us write a essay,i did my best to do it ,but i know the result just now i only get six ,mang my classmate get sevne or eight .i don't know why i only six and i don't know where i am less them.do you know how to write essay well?plase tell me ,thanks.
1 response
@owlwings (43915)
• Cambridge, England
22 Jun 11
The best thing to do - in fact the first thing you should do - is to discuss it with your teacher. I'm sure that he or she will be happy to go through your work and explain why you got lower marks than your colleagues.
It is only by knowing what mistakes we have made that we can properly learn how to do better next time.
