"A Love That Reach"

United States
April 6, 2012 8:42am CST
Oceans apart Sky is the distance The power of word A strength of heart You are the blue sky I am the deep ocean Glancing at each other Is all it can be done My body vapors to you so is yours drops to mine The cycle of the rain of love and emotion Make us reach each other The love that survive.
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@sid556 (31018)
• United States
20 Apr 12
Hi Triciababe, Welcome to Mylot!It is a nice poem. Did you write it? Just a little word of advice, please take a moment to read the guidelines and FAQS. It is against guidelines to post poetry as a discussion.
@Micmac (7116)
19 Apr 12
hi triciababe You have shared a nice romantic poem. The words are touching and it reminds me of unrequited love- though love grows from within the heart although your love is far away, still near in your thoughts. I don't know if I have the right translation of your poem? please share your thoughts.