How I Feel

United States
September 26, 2012 1:48pm CST
NOTE: THIS IS NOT REALLY HOW I FEEL. It's just a poem I wrote to deal with some things I have going on. Sometimes it hurts so bad I just want to give up. Swallow the pills and swallow the poison. Reach for comfort, so sharp, so cold. They're easier to reach for than your hand. So cold. So alone. I want to go home. I can't find home. Call me crazy and I'll show you crazy. Call me a b**ch, I'll show you that, too. Call my on the phone, it's better than a text. It shows me you care and want to know what's next. Would you go looking for me, If I ever went missing? Packed up my bags, And didn't say anything? What if I never came back? It was impossible to bring me back? Would I really be in a better place. Do unforgivable sins exist?
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Angelpink
@Angelpink (4035)
• Philippines
29 Sep 12
This is so beautiful , so good that you express you sad into a poem, that it transform sadness into worthy things.This is also what am doing , if i am so sad , i pour everything into writing. Also no such thing as unforgivable . All are forgivable , if it is not forgivable then it is not sin.
ladym33
@ladym33 (10979)
• United States
28 Sep 12
This is a very good poem. Nice work. I do have to say when I was your age maybe a little younger I used to write poems that were very similar it was my way of dealing with pain and thoughts running through my head. I do hope you find the comfort that seek and need, I am sorry you are sad, I hope you find a way to feel better.