Passion Roses

Epping, New Hampshire
February 27, 2016 3:34pm CST
I peeked out the window to see where you parked. As you opened your car door I hurried over to unlock my back door. I leaned on the door jam, waiting for you. It was dark because the light bulb was blown out over the back patio, but I could see you cross the grass in the moon light. I was excited to see you and immediately wrapped my arms around your neck. You wrapped your arms around me and I jumped up to wrap my legs around your body. The aroma of your cologne was arousing. I inhaled slowly, feeling my heart beat harder as you held me in your grip. I leaned down to your lips and you tilted your head to kiss me. Your hands held my ass and your grip tightened causing me to breath more slowly and deeper. I pulled away from your lips and kissed your neck, I could hear your breath deepen as you let me down off your body. We stepped into the house and I began to close the door. You stopped me, saying you forgot something in your car, so I let you go. Your cologne remained trailing behind you. I walked away from the door and sat on the couch in the next room waiting for you to return. The door closed and I patiently waited to see you enter the room. I could hear your Spanish accent softly called my name, so I got up to find you. As I turned the corner, you held a bouquet of yellow long stemmed roses. I examined them closely when I inhaled the aroma, they were also red tipped. "How beautiful" I whispered and attached my lips to yours.
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@xstitcher (30407)
• Petaluma, California
4 Mar 16
I peaked out the window to see where you parked. This (looking out the window, or taking a small glance at anything) is spelled, "peeked". "Peaked" is like a "Peaked roof".
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
3 Mar 16
This is a romantic writing. I think it would have been better made as a poem. But, it is good.
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@amadeo (111948)
• United States
27 Feb 16
very romantic.But not for me.Unless they are a gay couple But the straights will loved it.Saludos
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@pgntwo (22408)
• Derry, Northern Ireland
27 Feb 16
Had me hooked.
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@Missmwngi (12926)
• Nairobi, Kenya
27 Feb 16
Good one You should write a romantic novel
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• Church Hill, Tennessee
27 Feb 16
I love a good book and I think this is a great begining
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
27 Feb 16
great writing I could see and feel each person's passion and only really good writing will do this
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