Hopeless

@Dishari (687)
April 27, 2016 3:05am CST
Of all the things I could have been, Of all the things I couldn't be. Of all the things I should have seen, Of all the things I didn't see. Of all the love I could've loved, Of all the hate I poured instead. Of all the hurt I gave away, Of all the hugs that I still need! Here I am, waiting for, All the things that never happed. Here I am, not even trying, Here I am, just being sad.
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@magallon (19280)
• Philippines
29 Apr 16
Each line in your poem expresses sadness, emptiness and longing. Cheer up my dear! Don't be sad! Just be patient. Maybe you just have to look around you. Maybe you just don't realize that many people loves you. I'm sure your parents, brothers and sisters love you so much. Don't be hopeless. Look at the picture you have posted. It is sunset, right? But tomorrow, surely, that sun will rise again.Every day is always a new day and there is always hope in every despair.
@Dishari (687)
29 Apr 16
I know, thanks a lot for your support! But honestly, the poem doesn't much relate to my real life, I just made that up. It just consists of realisations I have at times. Otherwise I am a happy girl and have a wonderful life with people who love me and care for me! Thanks for your concern again, you seem to be a caring person.
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@magallon (19280)
• Philippines
29 Apr 16
@Dishari ... Oh I am so sorry. I thought the poem that you have posted is what your feelings say. It really conveys deep emotion. I am happy to know that you have a wonderful life... Always be happy my dear.
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@Dishari (687)
29 Apr 16
@magallon Sure! Thank you so much. Wish you you good luck. :)
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
30 Apr 16
that is so good and heart wrenching too sa.
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
2 May 16
@Dishari you are ost welcome great writing
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@Dishari (687)
1 May 16
Thanks a lot!
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
27 Apr 16
Wow! That's good one!
@Dishari (687)
27 Apr 16
:) :)
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