Third Time A charm?

By Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163781)

Garden Grove, California

May 3, 2017 10:33pm CST

Will make this short swee t neat. Tell your mates I love you n ow ?The night birds singing weile i type' I want to say good night my lotters' I my oh my third try.If this s ails off' I thibk I wil cry cry and cry. Im tred im wired but time to stop Feeling fun down like an old worn clock One original post and graphic b y P Hatley copyrighted 2017

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Chris Bergstrom

@chrissbergstrom (10767)

• Banks, Oregon

4 May 17

Have a good night Patsie a good poem

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@jstory07 (134482)

• Roseburg, Oregon

4 May 17

A very good poem.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

5 May 17

hi thanksto you both glad you liked it'asI had fun writig i t too

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@prashu228 (37526)

• India

5 May 17

Nice poem , i think your husband were in your thoughts

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

5 May 17

yes for some reason he was lol

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@jstory07 (134482)

• Roseburg, Oregon

4 May 17

Feeling down means you need to take a break and have a good night's sleep.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

5 May 17

yes I really did need that last night and slept pretty well for me lol

@marlina (154166)

• Canada

4 May 17

Now that we are on May 4th, I hope that you are not so tired.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

5 May 17

I do feel less iired byt its really hot here now this early eve

@noni1959 (9886)

• United States

4 May 17

Great poem. I hope you are having a nice restful night.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

4 May 17

I had a oretty gooid night but still got a short nap now time for lunch in a half hour.

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