Third Time A charm?

@Hatley (163726)
Garden Grove, California
May 3, 2017 10:33pm CST
Will make this short swee t neat. Tell your mates I love you n ow ?The night birds singing weile i type' I want to say good night my lotters' I my oh my third try.If this s ails off' I thibk I wil cry cry and cry. Im tred im wired but time to stop Feeling fun down like an old worn clock One original post and graphic b y P Hatley copyrighted 2017
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• Banks, Oregon
4 May
Have a good night Patsie a good poem
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@jstory07 (60960)
• Roseburg, Oregon
4 May
A very good poem.
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@Hatley (163726)
• Garden Grove, California
5 May
hi thanksto you both glad you liked it'asI had fun writig i t too
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@prashu228 (24816)
• India
5 May
Nice poem , i think your husband were in your thoughts
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@Hatley (163726)
• Garden Grove, California
5 May
yes for some reason he was lol
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@marlina (66467)
• Canada
4 May
Now that we are on May 4th, I hope that you are not so tired.
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@Hatley (163726)
• Garden Grove, California
5 May
I do feel less iired byt its really hot here now this early eve
@noni1959 (2838)
• United States
4 May
Great poem. I hope you are having a nice restful night.
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@Hatley (163726)
• Garden Grove, California
4 May
I had a oretty gooid night but still got a short nap now time for lunch in a half hour.
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@jstory07 (60960)
• Roseburg, Oregon
4 May
Feeling down means you need to take a break and have a good night's sleep.
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@Hatley (163726)
• Garden Grove, California
5 May
yes I really did need that last night and slept pretty well for me lol