ThereWas An Old Man From Fountaiin Valley

@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
August 19, 2017 4:31pm CST
Thre Was An Old Man From Fountain Valley Who hated living on an alley HI neighbors teased him as rent was low He retored "I have better place to go" But he forgot when he met pretty Sally. One original limerick and graphic by P Haley copyright 2017
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Ruby Hawk
@RubyHawk (99423)
• Atlanta, Georgia
19 Aug 17
Another good one Hatley. Keep em coming.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
20 Aug 17
goes to show allerys are ot all that bad lol lol
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Ruby Hawk
@RubyHawk (99423)
• Atlanta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@Hatley I would say so.
Kristen Howe
@KristenH (33363)
• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio
19 Aug 17
Great poem Patsie.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
19 Aug 17
thanks love to make limericks lollll
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Kristen Howe
@KristenH (33363)
• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio
19 Aug 17
@Hatley No problem.
Sandy
@velvet53 (22528)
• Palisade, Colorado
19 Aug 17
Oh my, his life changed in a hurry.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
19 Aug 17
yesSally changed hhis mind
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Sandy
@velvet53 (22528)
• Palisade, Colorado
19 Aug 17
@Hatley She sure did.
Judy Story
@jstory07 (134842)
• Roseburg, Oregon
20 Aug 17
Pretty Sally made him feel good about where he lived.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
20 Aug 17
yes she did and so he stayed lol oi
Marlina
@marlina (154165)
• Canada
19 Aug 17
Pretty Sally got his attention!
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
20 Aug 17
yes she di dd and he chaged his mind about yhwere he lived lol
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DianneN
@DianneN (247219)
• United States
19 Aug 17
That's a lovely poem!!!!
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
20 Aug 17
thanks dianeN
peachpurple
@peachpurple (13890)
• Malaysia
19 Aug 17
Cool rythm
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
20 Aug 17
thaks it has to rhyme partof the limerick scheme