Cannot See Forest For Trees
@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
August 21, 2017 2:16pm CST
Harping on trees or writ ing styles
We blot out what those same posts mean
Those carpers forget tjeir own posts are read
Perha[s some bu pass tje carpers because they carp
The carpers do not see beauty in what they carp
Because they are bent on criticism instead
Come on just bypass me and the others yuo hate
Dom't leave sour spiteful comments to hurt
You dont like poems by pass,too lomg bypass
You assume we all read your spite
Make wrong assunptions makes an ass
You do not see the great posts for the trees of poetry
One original poem by P Hatley
copyrigted 2017
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@sabtraversa (12944)
• Italy
21 Aug 17
Their loss, they waste their time and you make more pennies, whether you delete their comments or not.
Very good poem.
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