Sudden Challenge Poem

@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
August 22, 2017 10:37pm CST
T he words are lost,gone far, miss, lost, and frift My POem He is gone, not far I had missed him one I felt lone, lost and drigting then common sense asked Do you love him if so why He is gone, , left you to drift Evident you are not missed. Gone like in not here. So let him drift, he does not miss yuu Thamk your stars you are not gone' YOU are still here and here you stay. One dayyou wlll meet Mr Rilghtl One oroginal poerm and grahikc b y P Hatley copyrghted 2017
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vanny
@vandana7 (99024)
• India
23 Aug 17
Such a beautiful advise...so simple way of saying it. I remember Julie Andrews telling that 16 years old the sun always comes the next day...or something to that effect in The Sound of Music.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Aug 17
remember that Movile I guessI sawit a uber of times tool
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Judy Story
@jstory07 (134752)
• Roseburg, Oregon
23 Aug 17
Another nice poem that you wrote.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Aug 17
thanksI am glad you liked it