Birds of a feather.
By Ummulkhair
@Ummulkhair (116)
May 25, 2021 1:24pm CST
Hey my lotters, today I am posting my another poem which I wrote for me and my friends
I hope you will like it and if there's any mistakes then tell me cuz I am just learning to write poems. so here's the poem
:
We are birds who have wings,
But never thought of becoming kings.
We all have power to fly so high,
But still afraid of falling down and cry.
Still we all have to fly so high,
So that no one can make us embarrassed and shy,
If we fly and fall once,twice and thrice,
We need to keep it chilled like ice.
First we'll remove all the fears from our eyes,
So that we can see with courage in the skies.
Let's prove them all that we can also fly,
By achieving our dreams and becoming on high.
We can do and will do what we want,
Because we are birds of a feather that you can't.
We will change others mind and thoughts,
And we'll win because we fight.
Lets just break the barriers,
For the sake of our career.
Then we'll become an inspiration for others,
Because after rain, a rainbow appears of seven colours.
-ummulkhair
I hope you will like it and if there's any mistakes then tell me cuz I am just learning to write poems. so here's the poem:
We are birds who have wings,
But never thought of becoming kings.
We all have power to fly so high,
But still afraid of falling down and cry.
Still we all have to fly so high,
So that no one can make us embarrassed and shy,
If we fly and fall once,twice and thrice,
We need to keep it chilled like ice.
First we'll remove all the fears from our eyes,
So that we can see with courage in the skies.
Let's prove them all that we can also fly,
By achieving our dreams and becoming on high.
We can do and will do what we want,
Because we are birds of a feather that you can't.
We will change others mind and thoughts,
And we'll win because we fight.
Lets just break the barriers,
For the sake of our career.
Then we'll become an inspiration for others,
Because after rain, a rainbow appears of seven colours.
-ummulkhair4 people like this
3 responses
@mythociate (21437)
• Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
25 May 21
Good 
Just one little thing: "become an ice" ... maybe you mean something more like 'freeze like ice'?
Excellent stuff tho.
Just one little thing: "become an ice" ... maybe you mean something more like 'freeze like ice'?
Excellent stuff tho.1 person likes this
@Ummulkhair (116)
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26 May 21
It's not meant to be freeze like ice but to be cool like ice. AndThank you
2 people like this
@mythociate (21437)
• Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
26 May 21
@Ummulkhair Oh, like when someone is getting really anxious and you tell them, "Chill out, dude!"
Maybe you could change it to something like 'We need to keep it chilled like ice.'
