My Poem...."Entwined with Emptiness"
@smilingurvashi (1151)
India
February 18, 2007 4:30pm CST
"Winds have been blowing the settling sands,
A blind river has lost its way in the desert and is drying.
So many feets burned, held empty bottles, their hands;Tearless are the clouds, but someone's there who is crying.
Entwined is she with emptiness
Which is so worthless and vast
Her soul is craving of happiness,
In anticipation, her heartbeats are fast;That someday her saviour, like a hero will come,
Then the place worthliving, will her world become!"
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3 responses
@salil_44 (52)
• India
19 Feb 07
Being a professor of English I can definitely voice that if this is your poem and you have the creativity of such poetry then you are worth in text books of English Literature. Try to get published and also acclaimed. Without recognisation your poetry will not be noticed by critics. However I dont like critics but they are required to give you good or bad recognisation. All the best. I hopt to see you in literary books as a great poet. Anything more from me, you are welcome to ask. I am Salil from India.
@smilingurvashi (1151)
• India
19 Feb 07
that's really flattering! thanks for your appreciation. these words are really motivating. its more than enough that my creation is liked by you. thanks again!
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@smilingurvashi (1151)
• India
18 Feb 07
thanks!yes i have quite a good collection of poems that i've written. i discovered my passion for poems when i was 7 years old.
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