Not you...

@Zelmarq (11508)
Cebu City, Philippines
March 25, 2007 9:58pm CST
I came to see one night, and saw the chapters of my life. Stopped at the point of meeting you, how i felt those feelings new. I thought it ended there, but it started a one-sided love affair, you didn't know i was loving you with my heart's glow. I wondered why my heart beat for you, just like a mistle toe, it bursted there, revealing magnificent colors i can only glare. Minutes seemed eternity with you around, with your presence blue skies would abound. And on a falling star i wished that you, would somehow feel the way I do. Woke up with a tear one day, that i molded hypocrisy of clay, chose to look your way, only to chase my blues away. There's no use dreaming of you, with my heart aches long overdue, I know somewhere, someone, somehow who's worthy of my love so true, and maybe its not you. A poem made out of the abundance of my heart a few years ago ( college years)..., a poem made not for a boyfriend, not for an ex lover, but for a crush,...he was just a classmate not formally introduced, i dont even know he if he knows i existed hehehehehe. It was I guess part of growing up and a point in my life that I have felt I was in love. Call it infatuation or or something else, one thing I know it felt good, its something that makes you smile. Now I realized that I was just in love with the thought of falling in love.
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6 responses
• Philippines
26 Mar 07
I think im inlove...in ur Poem i like it not bcoz of each letters and gramar composing these poems but bcoz of each emotions that touch my heart.... it's full of wonderful and unexplainable emotion.....ur like a poem wizard.... im now one of ur fans....Godbless
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@Zelmarq (11508)
• Cebu City, Philippines
26 Mar 07
Hello cabillon! Yes thank you for falling in love with my poem, its already 9 years old. I made it for a crush. Thank you, i guess you are my first fan.
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@nelly5 (1425)
• United States
26 Mar 07
No, I am a fan too..I guess I didn't get that across clearly enough..lol
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@eshuniki (132)
• India
26 Mar 07
Thats a beautiful poetry!!Wow u hav agreat talent dear.Ya thats funny that we tend to imagine a great deal when we r young,and it does give us a lot of happiness too.Everyone has memories that they cherish for life.Just reading ur poem made me remember my days.Thanks!!
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@Zelmarq (11508)
• Cebu City, Philippines
26 Mar 07
Thank you for the compliment! ts the only two poems I made. Maybe I will try to make new ones if I have the time. Have a nice day!
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@nelly5 (1425)
• United States
26 Mar 07
Very good poetry!! You are talented! Isn't it crazy how you could feel so good about love at that time, when not even really being in love? I have been there..but like you said, I believe that there are times when people are actually in love with the thought of falling in love. Whatever it was for you, it is a great poem..lots of feeling and emotion put into that one. I look forward to you sharing more of your poetry..if you do. Take care, and thanks for sharing with us.
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@Zelmarq (11508)
• Cebu City, Philippines
26 Mar 07
Thank you! Its a 9 year old pom that I made long ago. I didnt know if it had a literal value but it was how I felt then and I need to express it. Have a nice day!
@Zelmarq (11508)
• Cebu City, Philippines
26 Mar 07
Thank you nelly!
• United States
29 Mar 07
How beautiful this is. Did you get it copyrighted? I hope so, or someone can steal this. Thank you for sharing it. I have rated you a ++ again, as always. Keep up the great posting and lovely poems.
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@Zelmarq (11508)
• Cebu City, Philippines
29 Mar 07
Hello again margie! I dont know how to copyright it. I love to share my poems here. I will try to make some more poem if I got the chance to.
• United States
28 Mar 07
This is great! Keep writing! We can say we knew you when... :-) Hope you post more!
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@Zelmarq (11508)
• Cebu City, Philippines
29 Mar 07
Thank you for the encouragement javabeans. I am writing again and hope to make good ones this time. God bless!
@mschiqui (1284)
• Philippines
26 Mar 07
your such a poetic person..perhaps you could make one for mylotters...
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@Zelmarq (11508)
• Cebu City, Philippines
28 Mar 07
thank you for the compliment mschiqui. Making one poem for mylot? HMmmm I'll have to think about it, nice idea though. I have not made poems for a couple of years, I dont know if I could still formulate a godd one. Take care and God bless!