Sunrise on the Shore  |
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|  Heavy foot steps crunch the Cold sand of the beach.Two men encapsulated in heavy body armor patrol alongside the shoreline.The air is cold and moist,but they do not feel it. It's still dark outside, and the only things visible are the two flashlights, and a faint reflection of the body armors. The Sea is restless, but that is not their concern.The Two men seem to have increased their pace,as their flashlights are both pointed at a large container washed away by the sea. Carefully inspecting the container one of them touches the cold metal surface,sweeps the sand off and reveals a small glass display wich appeard to be functional. A somewhat loud beeping noise is heard from within. The second man points his flash light towards the small display: " nuke armed,expl in..1'' ".
The air stopped moving ,the sea became still, everything was now quiet: The sun was rising!
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1.  vmks31 (7459)
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5 years ago
| |  When i read this i thought about Bernard Howe and a poem he put down that i saw linked with your post
Sunset
by Bernard Howe
Awe struck with this splendor
the sun sets on the Ocean
This makes my heart surrender
it cause's me deep emotion
The sun sets on the Ocean.
as it shimmers on the waves
It cause's me deep emotion
as it covers a thousand graves
As it shimmers on the waves
it glows like a golden pearl
As it covers a thousand graves
amidst the waves that swirl
It glows like a golden pearl
this makes my heart surrender
Amidst the waves that swirl
awe struck with this splendor.
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 Sengrath (176)
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5 years ago
| | yes ..nice poem :) where did u find the the poem linked to this? becose ..I just wrote this :) | | | |
| vmks31 (7459)
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5 years ago
| | I usually enter contact or reference link at the bottom of my responses I guess i slipped up but if you type the keyword Bernard Howe in Google Search you may luck in | | | |
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| 2. Angelwhispers (4603)
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5 years ago
| |  I wonder what thoughts went through the mens minds at that moment? Did you write this? I very much liked the imagery.
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| Sengrath (176)
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5 years ago
| | Yes , I tend to write exactly what crosses my mind in that particular moment ,..so I came up with this . I composed it as I was writing.Thank you for your comment. :) | | | |
| Sengrath (176)
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5 years ago
| | my imagination tells me that the two men did not had the time to think.. | | | |
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3.  AnythngArt (1901)
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5 years ago
| |  It's interesting how you take an image that is usually so calm (the beach) and make it a dangerous place (dangerous weapons washed ashore). You have to watch your capitalization, however. You seem to capitalize randomly like "Cold" in the first sentence. It becomes distracting from your idea, which is very intriguing.
Good luck with your writing.
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| Sengrath (176)
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5 years ago
| | Thank you , and indeed I have a tendency to capitalize when I feel like a word is more important in the sentence. I just like to write it like that..don't ask why ..I know it's not literary correct.:) | | | |
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