poetry..
By alleroid16
@alleroid16 (943)
Philippines
November 13, 2008 8:32am CST
have you ever write a poem? did somebody like it?
well, me? yes. i've write many poem in my life. this is my hobby when i can nothing at all. all my poems are in my blog well, some of there are just thoughts. well, i gave it to my classmate for her to read it. and she really liked it. and she said who is the lucky person i am saying in that poem and i just say nothing. i don't want to spill my beans to anybody. i just keep it as my top secret,.
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6 responses
@cripfemme (7698)
• United States
6 Dec 08
I love to write. I've self-published 9 books of poetry. I'm very public about my poetry. I give feature reading and performances. I enter poetry contests.
@alleroid16 (943)
• Philippines
6 Dec 08
whoa? 9books of poetry? really? that was really cool. how i wish i could read one of your poems. :) hehe. youre really cool.
@bing28 (3795)
• Philippines
15 Nov 08
oh yes, during my younger days, I love writing poems only that when I got busy with my job in sales, I no longer find time but still I do. when my friends requested me or during the times when I have to express the feelings of enjoyment or disappointments... I only write poems as birthday greetings to my family or close friends but not to be published, as I feel I still lack knowledge on how to write it like real poets do...
@alleroid16 (943)
• Philippines
15 Nov 08
uh, looks like many likes your poem. lucky them to have you.
happy my lotting.
@alleroid16 (943)
• Philippines
13 Nov 08
oh, nice. you make poems in indenesian language. i would be honor if i can read some of yor poems.
happy mylotting
@alleroid16 (943)
• Philippines
13 Nov 08
uh, yeah. i think my poems is not as good as some one who have a lot of experience. maybe i put good thoughts there that's why she liked it
@faln_angel1205 (1192)
• United States
13 Nov 08
Yes i do love poetry, mainly writing it, but i also love reading others work as well. Here is a poem i wrote for my son when he was a baby...just over a yr old.
HIS EYES
I feel his dark brown eyes
Stare into my heart
I sees the love I have for him
And has seen it from the start
His little hands, reach for my face
With such a tender touch
He knows his Mommy loves him
And knows she does so much
He likes to dance around the house
To the music that we make
He laughs and smiles while looking at me
Its all that I can take
He brings this joy to my life
Every single day
He knows I love him with all my heart
In every single way
by Rebecca Salpacka
This was the last poem I have ever written, not sure why I havent since, but i guess its just because i havent had any big ideas for what to right about.
@alleroid16 (943)
• Philippines
13 Nov 08
oh, nice poem you made, and how sweet. you made that poem fo your son. haha. nice. lucky he is.
happy my lotting.
@Porcospino (31365)
• Denmark
12 Jan 09
I have written many poems. I wrote my first poem when I was 12 and it was inspired by a cat poster that I had in my room. Sometimes we had to write poems in school, and I think that was one of the things that made me start, because I liked writing poems and I thought that it was fun. When I got older I applied at a school for writers, but I didn't get accepted, so I just kept writing on my own. I have written many poems, and I would like to get some of them published, but first I want to finish some of the poems that I am still working on.
