Just piece of good writing

Philippines
July 14, 2009 7:42pm CST
Evidence Time has a way of healing, or so they say So why am I still left here cryin'? Caught in these ways of emotions as people stare I find there's no real place for me to hide Well I've been trying in vain Was only fooling myself With each passing day The pain still stays the same Caught you in the arms of another I've been dying everyday since then Caught you in the arms of another I've found out about you What more is it that you need Right now clearly it's not me With every minute that I gave to you The punches that I took from you Why was there no warning love? What more is it that you need Right now clearly it's not me Despite of everything I did for you Excused if i'm surprised was the moment that I found out that we were through Caught you in the arms of another I've been dying everyday since then When everything seemed alright You turn and break my heart Didn't I deserve your love? It kills me inside to think of his arms Wrapped around you now, Is he a better lover than I? Well I've been trying in vain Was only fooling myself With each passing day The pain still stays the same Caught you in the arms of another I've been dying everyday since then I've found out about you Time has a way of healing, or so they say So why am I still left here?
2 responses
@snowy22315 (208846)
• United States
15 Jul 09
love can be difficult and can be so hard on people I think there are some people who are just not going to follow through on their commitment. I think there are so many people that just take love for granted and their are many people who often do what they feel they need to do in their love.
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• Philippines
17 Jul 09
This is written by Gabe Alipe by the way. Very nice words.
@snowy22315 (208846)
• United States
15 Jul 09
That is really nice and a really great poem. It is something you can really like and be proud of. It is something that will stay with you and you will be able to look at it in years to come and remember it,e ven though it is something you probbly ideally would choose to forget. Good luck with your poetry in the future.
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