Just piece of good writing
By Redhornet117
@Redhornet117 (1248)
Philippines
July 14, 2009 7:42pm CST
Evidence
Time has a way of healing, or so they say
So why am I still left here cryin'?
Caught in these ways of emotions as people stare
I find there's no real place for me to hide
Well I've been trying in vain
Was only fooling myself
With each passing day
The pain still stays the same
Caught you in the arms of another
I've been dying everyday since then
Caught you in the arms of another
I've found out about you
What more is it that you need
Right now clearly it's not me
With every minute that I gave to you
The punches that I took from you
Why was there no warning love?
What more is it that you need
Right now clearly it's not me
Despite of everything I did for you
Excused if i'm surprised
was the moment that I found out that we were through
Caught you in the arms of another
I've been dying everyday since then
When everything seemed alright
You turn and break my heart
Didn't I deserve your love?
It kills me inside to think of his arms
Wrapped around you now,
Is he a better lover than I?
Well I've been trying in vain
Was only fooling myself
With each passing day
The pain still stays the same
Caught you in the arms of another
I've been dying everyday since then
I've found out about you
Time has a way of healing, or so they say
So why am I still left here?
2 responses
@snowy22315 (208846)
• United States
15 Jul 09
love can be difficult and can be so hard on people I think there are some people
who are just not going to follow through on their commitment. I think there are so many people that just take love for granted and their are many people who often do what they feel they need to do in their love.
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@Redhornet117 (1248)
• Philippines
17 Jul 09
This is written by Gabe Alipe by the way. Very nice words.
@snowy22315 (208846)
• United States
15 Jul 09
That is really nice and a really great poem. It is something you can really like and
be proud of. It is something that will stay with you and you will be able to look at it in years to come and remember it,e ven though it is something you probbly ideally would choose to forget. Good luck with your poetry in the future.
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