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TheMonkeyKing (13)1 month ago

I swam naked among the clouds
. . .and drowned.
Now all you see is a shadow,
. . .of what I had been,
More ethereal,
More of Lazarus kin.
Whose Dreams fullfill,
. . .my vision sense.
Embracing the movements of a carp,
and it's regal grace,
As if comparing,
My ignoble leaps and clumsy bounds,
Reaching heights and then again,
Return to my watery grave.
Never-ending,
Unceasing,
Unknowing my Princely state,
'til your kiss awaken me at Heaven's Gate.

 
 
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vonmac (1621) response was accepted on 10/21/2009.
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tags:  poetry, poems, frog, prince
 
1. myLot reputation of 77/100. vonmac (1621)   1 month ago

Wow, do we actually get paid for doing poetry on here?
I could make a bit of money methinks
Wordsworth, Burns, Pam Ayres and McGonnagle, I know them all.
I wonder how much The Song Of Haiwathha would be worth!!!

Are you Ledesma, in other words is that your own work, its good!!!


TheMonkeyKing (13)  1 month ago

It is my own work. Thank you for the comment. I had to put my name in there to emphasize authorship. I read somewhere, that some sites no longer accept published items specially when authorship is unverifiable.

On the lighter side, yea, The Song of Hiawatha would make quite a good amount of cash! But beware though as Halloween is nigh. You wouldn't want a visit from Longfellow.:)


myLot reputation of 77/100. vonmac (1621)  1 month ago

Oh, I get a visit from a Longfellow every night!!!
How poetic was that!!!

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