Sing me a Song: Your Lyrics.  |
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| Over the years I have found myself writing lyrics. Some are great, others are just silly and make nose sense at all. Some are filled with passion, others are filled with hate. I'd like to share a few of them here with you. Please feel free to let me know what you think of them. Also, I'd love it if you'd share some of your own lyrics. I'd also like to mention that all the lyrics posted on this discussion are copyrighted to me. And if anyone posts their own in responses to this discussion, they are copyrighted to their rightful owner. Please do not try to take them, and pass them off somewhere else as your own. "Why are you still here" All I ever wanted was to see you smile But you trampled on my feelings Laughing all the while Put up a barrier of ice around my heart The thought of loving you was a simple lark Each time you come around I fall in darkness When you speak my name it sounds repulsive Tell me why Why you still come around Tell me why Why you're still here with me I tried to hold you close once upon a time It led you to give me lies, and make my heart bleed Now that I know that I don't need you You're always around, pushing your way in. Tell me why Why you still come around Tell me why Why you're still here Tell me why Why you still come around Tell me why Why you're still here Can't you see the hate shimmering within my eyes The hate that I feel for you It grows from deep inside I don't want to hear your voice I don't want to feel your touch All I want is for you to go and never look back So now tell my why Why you still come around Tell me why Why you're still here I just want you to go I just want you to leave I just want you to go I just want you to leave Get the *Censored by MyLot* away from me Copyrighted to Dawn Miller 2005 ~*~ " Blood Red Moon " Darkness fills the skies I've lost my way Hidden by disguise There is no escape What I want from you You don't know how to give Can we carry through I just want to live Beneath the blood red moon I rush to escape death Will you realize soon Before I lose my breath Love is hidden within hate Can you hear my cries Being with you is my fate Please don't tell me lies Beneath the blood red moon I rush to escape death Will you realize soon Before I lose my breath Before I lose my breath Before I ... Copyrighted to Dawn Miller 2005 ~*~ " Cancer " Loving you soon became an addiction Sweeter than any cigarette An innocent love which filled my body So deluded by emotions I didn't see the truth Getting involved in cigarettes You know how it will end I didn't know your love would be the same As the nightmares came and went I started feeling sick Lord I'll never be the same Loving you was my biggest mistake Blindsided by lust I almost lost my way The days I started coughing blood I knew it had to end Sweet Addictions Always end the same Heart smoldering with tar Lungs encased in disease This cancer you inflicted Will be the death of me Loving you was my biggest mistake This cancer you inflicted Will be the death of me Will you even shed a tear Copyrighted to Dawn Miller 2005 | | | | | |
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1. sunnypub (1603)
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6 years ago
| | This is a little ditty I made up for my daughter when she was a baby. I love you like a puppy loves a shoe and a kitten loves a ball of yarn I wanna hold you tight and keep you warm at night and cuddle you in my arms I always want what's best for you I want you to be happy before you came I was so strong now I'm just so sappy. Copyrighted to Cheryl Larkin 1998 Definately not going to win any awards but my daughter loves it and sings it herself now and also asks me to sing it to her. She is 8 now. | | | | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | Awe, I think that's simply beautiful. It's so touching, and I'm sure that when she grows up and has children of her own, she may be passing that song down and into their hearts as well. ^_^ | | | |
imranwajid (664)
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6 years ago
| | nice try. But as far as I am concerned I let the singers composers and lyricists do their job. Dont want to create something for which I am not made. Any way nice one. | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | Yes you do have a point, there are some people who write lyrics, who really shouldn't. I'm not saying that mine are good enough to ever actually become songs. I do it because it's just a fun little hobby, nothing more, and nothing less. | | | |
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2. isha900 (1423)
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6 years ago
| | i like pope song and i like to share with u | | | | | | |
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| advocat (84)
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6 years ago
| | its ok but you your not ok \ | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | What is that supposed to mean? | | | |
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Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | I've always been quite a fan of, Evanescene, and I thank you for sharing the lyrics. It's a great song, and the power that she has to belt it out in that voice is beautiful. But this discussion was set up so that people could share lyrics that they have created themselves. Still, a beautiful song none the less! And, that's a great picture of the band as well. | | | |
| mlumptx (10)
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6 years ago
| | I'm not a big fan of this band.. but, nonetheless, their lyrics are powerful. I am amazed by how many songs I truly do not care for, yet when reading the lyrics to the same songs it is a different story. Some may argue about poetry versus song lyrics, but to me anything is a poem... a story, a scream, even an Evanescence song. | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | Poetry and Lyrics are closely drawn together, so you have a point in what you're saying. Often in the days of old poetry would be sung, rather than just read aloud. That alone is enough of a strong pull to tie to two together. | | | |
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4. sj4ever (130)
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6 years ago
| | You have good stuff, slightly mournful bit like evanescence which you said you like :) Keep on writing who knows you could be a big time writer one day. | | | | | | |
sj4ever (130)
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6 years ago
| | Don't think mournful is the right word but hope you know what I mean. | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | I do understand what you're trying to say, thank you. The lyrics I shared were a bit morbid, but I haven't been writing songs that depressing in a few months, now that I'm happier, and have someone treating me right, in love, and all that good stuff. My current writings have been much, much more sappy. | | | |
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5. anne_143god (3644)
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6 years ago
| | This is one song I like. My head's in a jam Can't take you off my mind From the time we met I've been beset by thoughts of you And the more that I ignore this feeling The more I find myself believing That I just have to see you again CHORUS: I can't let you pass me by I just can't let you go But I know that I am much too shy to let you know Afraid that I might say the wrong words and displease you Afraid for love to fade before it can come true Like a child again I'm at a loss for words How does one define a crush combined with longing Longing to possess you oh so dearly I'm obsessed by completely I'll go mad if I can't have you CHORUS: I can't let you pass me by I just can't let you go But I know that I am much too shy to let you know Afraid that I might say the wrong words and displease you Afraid for love to fade before it can come true I can't let you pass me by I just can't let you go Let me say the things and say the words to let you know I would rather say the awkward words than lose you Or for love to fade before it can come true Afraid for love to fade before it can come true My head's in a jam Can't take you off my mind... | | | | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | Thanks so much for sharing. | | | |
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6. katcarneo (809)
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6 years ago
| | when i was in high school i was so nuts about this one guy and i've written tons of songs for him...so they're really quite cheesy but whatcan i say, that's the product of my 16-year-old mind. from "Tears of Pain" --surely, these are tears of sorrow and pain caused by who?nobody knows but if you have a heart that has loved then you would know that tears like these could only be cause by a love that turned so wrong... from "Like I don't Exist" ---even though you're blind and you leave me behind still i can't take you out of my mind you don't hear when i call don't catch me when i fall and you treat me like i don't exist at all from "You think" -you think i don't go crazy when i am not with you you thing i don't feel shakiy everytime i'm near you yea i've said i don't want you, but baby i lied and i've said i don't need you but you don't know how much i've cried these tears i shed for you you think i don't love you but i do from "Let me Be there" --Let me be there for you when you're down and feeling low and you have nowhere to go let me try to help you through it'a what i wanna do for you though you don't love me i know i'll still love you | | | | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | Those are quite the interesting little snid-bits. I guess it's common for a lot of high school girls to go through periods like that, and express themselves in lyrics, or poems about a certain guy. =-( Some can be so painful, even looking back all these years later. And others can make you feel silly that you ever thought that you could never find someone better than that one jerk in high school. | | | |
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7. williamruth (117)
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6 years ago
| | whn i look into your holiness and when i gaze upon your loveliness when all things that sarround me in the shadows of the light of you when i found the joy of reachin your heart and things that i found in your heart. and this is the first time iam composing a song and the lirycs so please bear with me. | | | | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | Sounds like a good start, I can't wait to see how the rest turns out for you. | | | |
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8. abg1988 (375)
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6 years ago
| | rose is a flower that lives for a day friendship is a tower that lives for ever | | | | | | |
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| 9. marzieh (46)
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6 years ago
| | dont cry! im here put ur hand in my hand u want my feeling and flower i want u!!!! | | | | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | That's quite interesting, thanks for sharing. | | | |
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10. nidahali (302)
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6 years ago
| | I love songs but dont/cant write them :( | | | | | | |
Virginians (229)
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6 years ago
| | Writing lyrics isn't for everyone, in fact I probally shouldn't try to write them myself. lol Thanks for dropping by and responding though. ^_^ | | | |
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