littlepunk81

@littlepunk81 (21)

Canada • Age 45

Joined myLot 18 years ago

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Nature's Love

littlepunk81 @littlepunk81 (21) • Canada 14 Jul 08

What's in a name By the thorn of a rose The toll of a bell And all that goes A shadow in the bright Of a darkened day And the bird with no wings Will fly away Give to the growth Of a nonexistent weed That will spread in...

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littlepunk81 thank you so much, it was like that when i wrote it. It just kind of flowed out of my head, if that makes any sense, ha ha.

15 Jul 08

charlie

littlepunk81 @littlepunk81 (21) • Canada 13 Jul 08

Charlie was a man who died One unfortunate night But now lives up in Heaven And works with all his might Charlie has a special job Few angels ever get He decides the lovers And when they first met One day Charlie had a...

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littlepunk81 i wrote this poem when i was only 12. it is my favorite out all my pieces, though by no means my best ha ha, but it is the one i love to tell the most.

14 Jul 08

We've All Known Someone That Made Us Feel This Way

littlepunk81 @littlepunk81 (21) • Canada 3 Jul 08

As the sound of our laughter Breaks a comfortable silence True feeling is left unguarded And I won't let on That you are unarmed But my smile lets my secrets out Making you all the wiser To my craziness for you And there...

cant get enough

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littlepunk81 thanks for noticing!!! one of my fave parts of writing poetry is the unlimited manipulating of words. as for the feedback, keep it coming, this is the first time i've been able to share my poetry with the world, and im very interested in how it makes people...

4 Jul 08

We've All Known Someone That Made Us Feel This Way

littlepunk81 @littlepunk81 (21) • Canada 3 Jul 08

As the sound of our laughter Breaks a comfortable silence True feeling is left unguarded And I won't let on That you are unarmed But my smile lets my secrets out Making you all the wiser To my craziness for you And there...

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littlepunk81 thanks for the support!! i find poetry is a natural self expression for many of us out there.

4 Jul 08

looking for feedback, what do you think? any ideas on a title?

littlepunk81 @littlepunk81 (21) • Canada 2 Jul 08

Standing On the cliff The edge of My life Chance is the Air I breath Happiness My parachute The drop is Reality Fragility Of the human wings Never Meant to fly Clipped, tamed Even broken Yet Still I soar On...

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littlepunk81 thank you so much for your comments and suggestions. im new to mylot and really am hoping to use it as an outlet for some my mental ramblings ha ha.

3 Jul 08

looking for feedback, what do you think? any ideas on a title?

littlepunk81 @littlepunk81 (21) • Canada 2 Jul 08

Standing On the cliff The edge of My life Chance is the Air I breath Happiness My parachute The drop is Reality Fragility Of the human wings Never Meant to fly Clipped, tamed Even broken Yet Still I soar On...

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littlepunk81 thank you so much!! the ultimate goal of all my work is to be painless for the reader. No matter who you are or what you've been through, i like to think anyone can relate to or even just "get" my writing. your idea for the title actually gave me a new insight...

3 Jul 08