Just a boy from Clare! A Remembrance Day Poem

@bookbar (1609)
Sudbury, England
November 12, 2015 9:21am CST
This is a poem my 13yr old grandson wrote for a school project which @jaboUK asked me to put into a post. Clare is the small Suffolk town, where he attends school, which was voted best war poem by the school,and adopted by the local church for future Remembrance services. Just a boy from Clare Walking on a cold October day, Laughing and joking about the sun of May, How blind we were to see my friend, That our lives and hearts would never mend . You were just a boy from Clare, The ring of gunfire above your brow, The joke is wearing thin, my friend, With every letter home you send. Just a boy from Clare, It is time to go over now, Brothers in arms to honour your vow, Up into no-man’s land. Just a boy from Clare, Your body in the mud, Your mind is freed from the horror my friend, As your bones begin to buckle and bend. Just a boy from Clare? The consequence of war, For ‘King and Country’ you entered the fight So who could ask for more? It could have been me,on our last day out there But the bullet chose you,so 'No more the boy from Clare.'
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@jaboUK (64346)
• United Kingdom
12 Nov 15
Oh my goodness - this brought a lump to my throat. How talented your grandson is, thank you so much for posting it for us all to see. I'll suggest this to some of my friends.
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@Marcyaz (35316)
• United States
12 Nov 15
It definitely was a moving poem.
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@LadyDuck (502573)
• Italy
12 Nov 15
He is a cute young boy and he is also very talented. Such a beautiful and sad poem.
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@Marcyaz (35316)
• United States
12 Nov 15
How deep thinking from a child to write this poem, no wonder it was voted best war poem. Thanks for Sharing.
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@silvermist (19701)
• India
12 Nov 15
@bookbar What a poem,simple but how we get a glimpse the horror of war. A very touching poem conveying the sense of loss too.No wonder it was voted best war poem.Thanks to @jaboUK too for prompting you to post this.I see the nice photo of your grandson though I do not know his name.
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@bookbar (1609)
• Sudbury, England
12 Nov 15
Obviously the photo was taken at a much younger age,,,thank you for your comments, and his name is Jackson.
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@silvermist (19701)
• India
12 Nov 15
@bookbar That was a really nice poem by Jackson.
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@Marcyaz (35316)
• United States
12 Nov 15
A glimpse of the horrors of war is this poem.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
12 Nov 15
This sent shivers down me. Very good. I can see why it was voted the best war poem. Your grandson has a lot of talent.
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@Auntylou (4262)
• Oxford, England
12 Nov 15
You have made me cry, or rather your grandson's poem has. You could almost imagine he had been there. A very sensitive and bright child. You must all be delighted for this honour but even more for his sweet caring nature. Thank you, @Jabo for suggesting this.
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@Marcyaz (35316)
• United States
12 Nov 15
It did sound almost like he was right there with the rest of the troops.
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@jaboUK (64346)
• United Kingdom
12 Nov 15
@Auntylou You are welcome, I definitely thought it was worth suggesting.
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@bookbar (1609)
• Sudbury, England
13 Nov 15
@Auntylou He does have a sweet caring nature, though as with many youngsters, not often put on display to the wider world...
@suziecat7 (3349)
• Asheville, North Carolina
16 Nov 15
Just plain beautiful and from one so young is amazing.
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• Greece
13 Nov 15
It is remarkable that a boy so young could catch the horror and sadness of war as your grandson has done. This is a great encouragement for him that hopefully will keep him writing poems throughout his life.
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@Juliaacv (56322)
• Canada
12 Nov 15
Wow, such a wonderful work of art here. You should be very very proud of this young man, his poem is outstanding and I can understand why it was choosen. He has quite the insight for someone living in the here and now and so young.
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@bluesa (15022)
• Johannesburg, South Africa
12 Nov 15
@bookbar , your grandson is a talented young man, this poem from him really hits home the sadness and horror of war. I can understand why it has been adopted by the local church for future Remembrance services. @jaboUK than you for letting know about this.
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• Midland, Michigan
12 Nov 15
He did a great job with this. We have a small town near us with the same name, which I find interesting. Cool about the school vote and the church decision.
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@bookbar (1609)
• Sudbury, England
13 Nov 15
@MarshaMusselman It does seem that many UK local names also pop up in the US, does make you wonder whether the original settlers were from these same places
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• Midland, Michigan
13 Nov 15
@bookbar Hmm, hadn't thought of that. Not sure that I'd take the time to check into it either. It could also be that the original settlers had that as a last name.
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@Fleura (35055)
• United Kingdom
13 Nov 15
How very touching and how well he has captured the mood.
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@nanette64 (20363)
• Fairfield, Texas
12 Nov 15
Oh @bookbar , how outstanding. A truly sad but wonderfully written poem.
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@JudyEv (382258)
• Rockingham, Australia
12 Nov 15
What a lovely verse. He has a wisdom beyond his years. You must be very proud of his effort.
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@divalounger (6182)
• United States
13 Nov 15
I found this quite moving--especially from one so young
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@BelleStarr (61463)
• United States
14 Nov 15
A very touching poem from a boy with great talent. I can only imagine what his future writing will look like. Amazing.
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@wiLLmaH (8801)
• Singapore, Singapore
13 Nov 15
This is a sorrowful poem but it is the reality. Your grandson is very talented and his poem is full of feelings that it seems he saw and experienced the war first hand.
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14 Nov 15
a talented young man
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@PainsOnSlate (21845)
• Canada
16 Nov 15
That gave me goosebumps. That 13 year old did a great job with that poem. Your grandson is creative and sensitive.