Suddendeathpoetry challenge, annoying rhymes!
By Jekca
@Jessicalynnt (50523)
Centralia, Missouri
January 30, 2016 9:07am CST
Today’s edition of the Suddendeathpoetry challenge I dubbed annoying rhymes. The rules are the same as always. Use all 5 words: (Bright, light, right, kite, sight) in any tense of the words. Try to write the poem in one sitting or in under an hour. This rules is really only to try and help quash our inner editors, not a hard rule. Any type of poem is fine. Post yours as a comment, or at least share a link to your post of it so we can all read each other’s. Oh and have fun!
My entry is as follows:
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Bright was the sun, high in the sky.
Light was the mood, dragon did fly.
Kite of course soaring, flying so high.
Sight to be behold, pleasing the eye
Right up above me, gravity to defy.
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15 responses
@Rohvannyn (3098)
• United States
30 Jan 16
Bright was the blade that was held by the knight
Keen were his eyes as he stood in the light
Strong was his armor as he looked to the right
A boy was running and flying his kite.
He smiled for a moment, as the child came in sight.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
30 Jan 16
I love the knightly additions! 
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@sallypup (69176)
• Centralia, Washington
30 Jan 16
@rohvannyn This is Stan Rogers beauty. Lovely. Now just add your visual artistry and you'll have a perfect creation.
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@AbbyGreenhill (45490)
• United States
30 Jan 16
The night was not very bright,
There was very little light.
Today brightness is about right,
So I can fly my new kite,
And it should be a quite a sight.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
30 Jan 16
lovely! Then again, your's always are!
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@AbbyGreenhill (45490)
• United States
30 Jan 16
@Jessicalynnt Oh thank you - my secret is not to put too much thought into them!
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
@AbbyGreenhill lol and that isn't a secret, that's the point!
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@ElusiveButterfly (45941)
• United States
30 Jan 16
The lamppost light,
once shined so bright,
but on this night it wasn't quite right.
The kite had flown high in the sky,
its tether now caught by the lamppost tight,
til the frustrated man cut it loose with a knife,
and it caught a breeze,
and flew out of sight.
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@ElusiveButterfly (45941)
• United States
31 Jan 16
@Jessicalynnt you are making me think. Thank you!
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
oh I like the addition of a lamppost and a tangled up kite!
and a tangled up kite!2 people like this
@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
@ElusiveButterfly I do like to challenge people! mwhahaha
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@Drosophila (16568)
• Ireland
30 Jan 16
Bright light shine right into my eyes..
I thought I was going to lose my sight.
My soul departed from me like a kite,
Didn't realise it was my turn to die.
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@ElusiveButterfly (45941)
• United States
30 Jan 16
@Jessicalynnt as you know I do not like poetry. I did give it another try though.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
30 Jan 16
hehehhe, you don't have to make it rhyme, the words I chose just happen to rhyme!
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
@ElusiveButterfly lol, well trying is always good too!
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@cindiowens (5120)
• North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
30 Jan 16
I was on the beach flying my kite,
I felt a chill, something's not right.
The sky got suddenly blindingly bright
I squinted and looked up, and oh what a sight
A huge sky craft with a resplendent light.
Wondering what would be my plight
I let go of the string that I had held tight
I sat there paralyzed until the night
The motionlessness I could not fight
I mustered the courage and the might
To wake myself from this horrendous fright..
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
30 Jan 16
Oh you added to the rhyme list, love it!
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@RasmaSandra (98005)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
30 Jan 16
@Jessicalynnt Here goes -
Outside the window the sun was so bright
It bathed the afternoon in a golden light
Made me feel so good and right
Along came the wind
I went to fly my kite
Seeing it up high was such a wonderful sight
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@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
31 Jan 16
The poem was fine with its rhythm and rhyme.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
Why thank you, it felt odd writing one this short.
@celticeagle (189833)
• Boise, Idaho
30 Jan 16
I am no poet. My mind doesn't work that way. I see some good ones here.
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@celticeagle (189833)
• Boise, Idaho
30 Jan 16
@Jessicalynnt ...I do enjoy reading them.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
@celticeagle Well then I have succeeded, just want people to enjoy and have fun
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
30 Jan 16
I am not either, but I do enjoy writing in prose now and then. but it's all good, at least you enjoyed right?
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@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
1 Feb 16
I don't see these words as annoying - i'll work on the challenge soon
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
2 Feb 16
hahaha, well sometimes people think silly rhyming is annoying
@lokisdad (4226)
• United States
1 Feb 16
@Jessicalynnt I don't think i would do a poem any justice
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
1 Feb 16
@lokisdad no that's some negative thinking! There is no justice, only try! lol
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
eh, maybe. I don't think so, the whole point is in the doing, nothing about quality or lack thereof. 
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@TypicalRussian (747)
• Budennovsk, Russian Federation
31 Jan 16
Hohoho. The shortest and the quickest one:
Bright kite was flying high,
Sunshining hurt my sight.
I rubbed my sick right eye
To check if i see light.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
Very lovely, nice job on short and still awesome!
@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
30 Jan 16
lol, they keep on coming! but no more till next weekend.
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@nottoooldtowrite (2715)
• Philippines
31 Jan 16
One morning, the sun is shining bright
And I got a feeling that is light.
I went out tagging my kite.
I let it fly, oh what a beautiful sight!
I know I made something right.
@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 16
Loved it, tells a very nice story,
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
1 Feb 16
@nottoooldtowrite I like to write them as well, feel like I have created something worthwhile
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@nottoooldtowrite (2715)
• Philippines
31 Jan 16
@Jessicalynnt oh thank you. I love writing poems.
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