First Revisions of New Book are Done

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In between wrapping gifts and staying out of the kitchen while my missus bakes, I have been making revisions to the manuscript of my new book based on notes from my primary proofreader, my missus. The actual typos were, thankfully, few. The big change was in the plot line. I won't go into detail, but it called for an extensive rewrite of the first half of the book. The revised version is now in the hands of my secondary proofreader, my oldest son. I'm interested to see what comments he has. I've included one of the potential cover ideas for the new book. I'd love some feedback.