Accepting and Rejecting Suggestions
@just4him (323168)
Green Bay, Wisconsin
April 8, 2019 10:46am CST
If you follow me, you know I'm working on a deadline with my book, Thread of Evidence. I never know what a day will bring when I open the book and start working on it. At one point the editor wanted to delete an entire chapter, considered two of them, but only trimmed the second. Not happening. The chapter in question is one of the most important and pivotal chapters in the book and she wanted to delete it. I don't know her reasons, except as she pointed out at the beginning of this project, she was cutting for word count.
You might not be aware, and I certainly wasn't before I contracted with my publisher, that her standard word count per book is 50-90 thousand words. You might recall my book is much larger than that. When I edited it the first time, I started with 203K words and worked it down to 185K I think. Her cuttings took it down to 98K. You can imagine she cut the heart and soul out of my book to lose half of it like that.
Today, I start work on chapter 23 of 53 chapters. Only 30 to go. It's going far better than I expected. There's still a lot I'm rejecting, but even with what I've accepted so far, my word count now stands at 164,451. I'm also down 50 pages. It will be interesting to see where the word count will be when I finish this before May first.
I know most publishers don't like to publish bigger than 125K for first-time authors, which is what I am to the publishing world. My previously published books were self-published. This is my first book contract. With 30 chapters to go, I wonder if I will have 125K when all is said and done.
I'm not pushing on word count. If I was, I would accept all her suggestions and the book would be crap and I wouldn't promote it. However, the way it stands now, it's starting to blossom and will be a wonderful book when finished. I will say, I'm learning a lot in this editing process. Things, I never noticed before, I'm seeing more clearly.
I'm also paying more attention to shows, and movies I watch, looking for details, especially in movies I've seen before. I watched a good one on Saturday, Rip Tide at my friend down the hall's apartment. In my defense, I wouldn't have watched it on my own as I don't watch that genre very often. Romance, though I'm not sure it really falls in that category, isn't something I tolerate well. Anyway, I paid attention to details in the movie and how the human factor was more than just a cut and dried stick to the plan, story. There's a lot more to a good story than what people think.
When you pick up a book to read it or sit down to watch a show, you don't concern yourself with all the hidden details. However, when you sit down to write a review on it, you pick up on the human factor in the story, and how well it all flows together.
That is what I'm hoping to achieve with Thread of Evidence. So far, I believe I have and it's coming together well.
Time to start work. It's been a good morning here. I don't know if I'll be back today. I want to get more done than I did yesterday, which was three chapters. I don't have anything else to do today, and couldn't anyway as I don't have a working vehicle until sometime this week. More on that in another post.
How is your day going? Thanks for reading.
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@HazySue (39265)
• Gouverneur, New York
8 Apr 19
I can understand the problem of cutting a manuscript too much. She is looking at your book from a different angle than you are. It is sometimes hard to cut out things that are dear to your heart, little passages that you feel are important to the story. It is a little like cutting off a piece of you. I wish you luck in getting it all done and pared down. If anyone can do it and get it right, you can.
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@1hopefulman (45111)
• Canada
9 Apr 19
If it becomes a success, you might be able to publish the longer version. Might that be a possibility?
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@wolfgirl569 (135690)
• Marion, Ohio
8 Apr 19
I would have no idea how to do any of that. Hope you make good progress. Mine has been going good.
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@wolfgirl569 (135690)
• Marion, Ohio
13 Apr 19
@just4him Chickens are easy. They are happy if they have food and water 

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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
16 Apr 19
@wolfgirl569 It's good they are easy to care for.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
13 Apr 19
Lifeway is closing?
I'm planning to go to a Lifeway conference here with Beth Moore in August. I hope they'll still be available online. We don't have a store here, but I ordered a Bible study from them for my small group this past year based on the movie War Room. It's a great study.
I'm planning to go to a Lifeway conference here with Beth Moore in August. I hope they'll still be available online. We don't have a store here, but I ordered a Bible study from them for my small group this past year based on the movie War Room. It's a great study.1 person likes this
@Elizaby (6902)
• Pensacola, Florida
14 Apr 19
@just4him I was in the store here yesterday to pick up Karen Kingsbury latest book and the employee helping they don't really expect to get started ltil late July and that you can still buy from Lifeway way on line (as it is part of the SBC) their materials.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
13 Apr 19
I hope both your colds are gone now. I agree. The weather doesn't help.
Thank you.
@Marilynda1225 (91068)
• United States
8 Apr 19
Hope you can get your book within the criteria for your publisher without losing the heart and soul of the story.
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@Courtlynn (67089)
• United States
10 Apr 19
Oh wow, that's a whole lot of cutting!
I'm glad you're learning stuff from all this editing though!
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
13 Apr 19
Thank you. There are things she's been pointing out more of in the last chapters I worked on. I messed up with POV and had to get it straightened out. Nothing like not knowing who's viewpoint is happening in the story. So, that's been a pain, but not a bad one. It's all working out.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
17 Apr 19
@Courtlynn Yes, it is. It's finished now.
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@JohnRoberts (109841)
• Los Angeles, California
8 Apr 19
When you review a movie, you do relax less because you have to pay attention harder and pinpoint areas of discussion.
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@LowRiderX (22901)
• Serbia
17 Apr 19
I do not doubt that everything will be OK. You just love it and it feels like it
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