A New (To Mylot) Poem/Lyrics

@jnrdutton (3452)
United States
May 17, 2019 4:21pm CST
He's thinking of suicide As the needle hits his vein Sometimes it seems life's beauty Is outweighed by the pain But then he hears a sweet whisper despite the haze that's hit his brain The voice says "let me help you, child You're going to be ok" I wrote this today, originally shared it to an art/blogging site. One caring person who reaches out to someone hurting may save a life.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 May 19
The message is very nice. I hope such a voice will come for those who need it.
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@CarolDM (203396)
• Nashville, Tennessee
17 May 19
Oh wow this definitely got my attention. Well done. The words will touch others.
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@innertalks (23742)
• Australia
19 May 19
Try not to be homeless from your heart too!
Sometimes, we think that our thoughts are who we are, or that our minds define/show us the true picture of the World. Then in times of desperation, the soft voice of truth, coming from our hearts and soul, might get through to us then. It is who we truly are, and it can guide our thoughts and mind, help rid them of fearful, and painful thoughts, to replace them with more fuller ones, of joy, and love. "When you see only through the mind, the Heart is silenced, and you miss the real beauty of life" - Dr. Joseph Dremer Photo Credit: The photo used here was freely sourced from the free media site: pixabay.com Try not to be homeless from your heart too!
• Rupert, Idaho
18 May 19
I agree with what the other comments say!
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• Sonora, California
18 May 19
This is so true and so powerful!
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