The Puffer Coat

Created by ChatGPT
United States
May 4, 2025 5:57pm CST
Like the rush of the wind, eighteen is now fifty-seven— but the girl that I knew is still inside, dancing barefoot in the snow, but this time in a puffer coat, earmuffs, hat, scarf, and gloves— wiser now, but still wild in her wonder, still chasing stars, still laughing under the wide-open hush of a winter sky. Still laughing under the quiet grace of time, where the winter’s hush brings peace, not strife— each breath a whisper, still full of life.
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@LindaOHio (187975)
• United States
5 May
What a wonderful piece of poetry. I wouldn't care to dance barefoot in the s**w!!! I will stay inside.
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• United States
5 May
Thank you. Yes, I remember you opinion about snow.
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@LindaOHio (187975)
• United States
7 May
@Chellezhere You're very welcome.
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@celticeagle (173969)
• Boise, Idaho
5 May
You bet she is. What a delightful bit of prose. Thank you for sharing. "the quiet grace of time'--- I like that.
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• United States
5 May
Thank you.
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@celticeagle (173969)
• Boise, Idaho
5 May
@Chellezhere ........you're welcome.
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@JudyEv (352545)
• Rockingham, Australia
5 May
Such a lovely piece of prose. I don't have a puffer coat but they always look good.
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• United States
5 May
Thank you. I don't have one either, but they seem popular, so I went with it.
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