worldmusic1

@worldmusic1 (2)

Indonesia • Age 48

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What can I do to make this poem better? Please help me.

inkyuboz @inkyuboz (1391) • Mandaluyong City, Philippines 26 Mar 09

This is my poem, I've made it a while ago and it's called [b] "Sweet Magdalene" [/b] [i]Tempt me my sweet and I will gladly succumb To your mesmerizing charms I shall be bound Neither your fleeting gaze nor your...

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worldmusic1 The poem is fine, it just needs to flow better. Get you commas and breaks in the right places. Keep writing!

28 Mar 09

PLEASE Help Me LOSE WEIGHT

camhiliciouz @camhiliciouz (196) • Philippines 27 Mar 09

hi guyz.. i know how affectionate and helpful MyLotters are that's why im asking everyone to help me lose weight... i work 40 hours a week in just by sitting, typing, etc in the office.. the only exercise i do is jogging for...

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worldmusic1 Hey there. I have a program that helps with this. You can use it online for free or they have an option to buy it for you computer so you can sue it when your not online. Go to fitday.com. This site will ask you all your measurements and weight. Then you type...

27 Mar 09