LOVE FOR ETERNITY... My poem / myLot

Philippines

January 8, 2008 8:16am CST

Here's one of the poems I have written. I write poems when I have nothing to do. :) Title: Love For Eternity Just like the moon so bright, I'll shine for you Just like the sun in the day, I'll rise for you. Shine, so I could tell the world I love you. Rise...every time I fall down from problems we might have. Just like the birds in the sky, I'll fly around the world for you. Just like the fish in the sea I'll swim in the oceans for you. Fly - to prove that my love is true. Swim - to show them you'll never be blue. These are the things I would do for you. For you will always be... MY LOVE FOR ETERNITY Hope you liked it! :)

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7 responses

musicman6

@musicman6 (2406)

• United States

8 Jan 08

Yes, this is a very nice poem, I like it! I am going to read it to my third wife, when I find her!

glitzypurple

@glitzypurple (1477)

• Philippines

9 Jan 08

let me know when you do :)

marketing07

@marketing07 (6266)

• South Korea

8 Jan 08

wow,very nice poems...you are really inlove.

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glitzypurple

@glitzypurple (1477)

• Philippines

9 Jan 08

Thanks! :) I can say I am

gkurt08

@gkurt08 (233)

• Philippines

11 Jan 08

Is it free verse? I write poems too, here's a stanza: In silent, lonely nights The moon peeks from the clouds. We all now loose out sights - of the mighty sun whose proud. I like them when they rhyme.

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