Stand Up For Liberty

@inertia4 (27961)
United States
January 29, 2017 11:47am CST
Hour after hour Our freedoms washed away The seconds tick on by With no relief in sight We have to stop that power That he has taken away He’s evil and he’s sly We can’t give up our rights The effects are already felt This world is coming apart The torture and the hatred Must come to an abrupt end To continue on this path Will surely break some hearts Alternative facts created And the lies will not end Our hunger and our freedom We have to fight for now We will not be proven wrong We must hold onto our beliefs All those lies we see them But how can it go on This land is a ticking time bomb With savages in the street The days of reckoning are coming We will win and stand tall This evil that’s upon us Will come to a deadly end The right is all consuming Thinking their on the ball We will no longer be shushed  We will reign again Copyright © 2017 Steven Cetta All Rights Reserved Image Credit: CoolText.com inertia4, Stand, Liberty, inertia4poetry
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@Kandae11 (53692)
29 Jan 17
Lovely.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
29 Jan 17
Thank you. I am glad you like it.
@just4him (307325)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
31 Jan 17
Interesting poem regarding America today.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
31 Jan 17
Thank you. We are in trouble and we need to stand together to beat the hatred.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
1 Feb 17
@just4him I just hope to happens soon before he gets us into more trouble.
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@just4him (307325)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
31 Jan 17
@inertia4 Yes we do.
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@Shellyann36 (11385)
• United States
8 Feb 17
Good way to put what is happening all around us here in the Good Ole US of A.
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@Shellyann36 (11385)
• United States
14 Feb 17
@inertia4 Our country has too many problems. One of the worst, is that we are hell bent on helping every other country in the world when we have so many people here homeless and hungry.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
15 Feb 17
@Shellyann36 That part I agree with. But we cannot turn our backs on immigrants who want to come here. Remember, america was built by immigrants.
@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
10 Feb 17
Thank you. We are all in trouble right now. This country is in jeopardy of losing it's identity.
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@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
31 Jan 17
there we go! I wasnt able to comment the other night, I love this version of the challenge!
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
31 Jan 17
Wow, thank you. I am happy you like it. I like these challenges.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
2 Feb 17
@Jessicalynnt I didn't know. I guess I was pre-occupied all that time. I did have a hard year last year. I will keep checking your profile for new ones.
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• Centralia, Missouri
1 Feb 17
@inertia4 Why thank you! Been running this for over a year now
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• Jacksonville, Florida
29 Jan 17
Nicely done. I write poetry too.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
29 Jan 17
Cool. I would love to read some of yours. Well now that I am going through your posts I am sure I might bump into a few.
@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
31 Jan 17
@teresatrotter Cool, Thanks. I am still going to go through all your posts. I need time. I know it will take some time. I can go through a few at a time.
• Jacksonville, Florida
30 Jan 17
@inertia4 - You will. LOL
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@FayeHazel (40246)
• United States
29 Jan 17
Beautifully written poetry for this day and age
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
29 Jan 17
Thank you very much. Yeah, this is appropriate right now. And it is part of a poetry challenge.
@dfollin (24233)
• United States
8 Feb 17
Great way to put it!
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
10 Feb 17
Thank you. I thought so.
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@shaggin (71670)
• United States
13 Feb 17
Nice poem. Does it happen to be about the new president?
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
13 Feb 17
It happens to be about our country right now. You could say yes to that.
@bunnybon7 (50973)
• Holiday, Florida
2 Feb 17
pretty empowering.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
3 Feb 17
Thank you. I appreciate that comment. I think it is. We do need to stick together to defeat the hate that is now in Washington.
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• China
30 Jan 17
Good poem! Uplifting one.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
31 Jan 17
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
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@besweet (9861)
• Ireland
29 Mar 17
Nice poem. I like reading creative writings that express the current situation in the world.
@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
5 Apr 17
Thank you. I am real happy you enjoyed this. I try my best. That's all I can do. I just need to find my way back to getting inspired again.
• Preston, England
2 Feb 17
appropriately apocalyptic - well written
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
2 Feb 17
Thank you very much. I appreciate that.
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@jhechorain (1198)
• Susanville, California
22 Feb 17
Many of us feel this way, myself included. We are the people and we still have a voice. I hope something will be done when we speak up.
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
22 Feb 17
I hope so too. My son keeps telling me to run for president in 2020. I laughed at him. But he might have a point. We just have to band together to remove the disease that plagues us right now.
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• Susanville, California
22 Feb 17
It couldn't hurt to try. I wouldn't want the job though!
@DianneN (247219)
• United States
30 Jan 17
You said it all! Super!
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@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
31 Jan 17
Thank you. And there are a lot of choice words I would have liked to use. LOL. But I couldn't here.
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