I Want To Bring My Faith Back
@simplfred (20608)
Philippines
June 26, 2018 8:09am CST
I put my fate on heaven’s hand
To lead me to what was written
No more debate, no angry stand
Time teaches me how to listen
Outside the gate a lonelier land
Gloominess has me imprisoned
Hope it’s not late to join the band
To chant refrain of repentance.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
Thank you for the correction. I'm just a complicated person searching for a place where I should belong. Skeptical on things especially about religion. Hopefully, one day I will find my inner peace. Thank you.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
I'm certain they will not. It is my new poem and never posted online just here. Thank you.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
27 Jun 18
@1hopefulman But what bother me now if I can possibly post this one to the other site after posting it here...
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@mythociate (21437)
• Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
3 Jul 18
I hear you, but I remember this Galileo quote.
We just have to remember not to let our imaginations run too far away from 'reality' (which will punish us if we use our imaginations to build on foundations that are not actually there!)
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
26 Jun 18
nice poem though not being religious it is a pleasant enough read
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
26 Jun 18
@simplfred or the grown ups much of the time too
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
Thank you so much. Yeah, I know, I read some of your stuff and definitely they exposed a lot of truth. To be honest I admire it. Though, I don't want to complicate everything sometimes. But my faith still complicated to explain in the eyes of the child.
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@quantum2020 (12040)
• Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico
26 Jun 18
The heaven is the best place to put one's fate. Very nice poem
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@Letranknight2015 (51532)
• Philippines
28 Jun 18
There are moments were we tend to go astray and come back once we realize our mistakes.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
27 Jun 18
Yeah, it is a gift a gift I think and a curse as well. Thank You.
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@ridingbet (66857)
• Philippines
27 Jun 18
nice poem but i somehow missed the 'religious' part of it
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
26 Jun 18
I think I would agree. Though sometime we need religion for reason.
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@MarshaMusselman (38658)
• Midland, Michigan
29 Jun 18
Gloominess and depression certainly does tie people up, when w we remember a and meditate on what Christ accomplished for us it's much easier to s see the sunlight or silver lining
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