Did you write this poem by yourselves or copied from others?i liked it very much
By Jane
@jaiho2009 (39140)
Philippines
November 28, 2011 4:10am CST
This is exactly the question/comment from one of my blogs.
and here is the Poem!
1
I saw you in my dream, same face, same place and same dress.
Your face gleamed with sunrays crowning your hair as the sun sets.
When finally the darkness spread you walked away passing right of me,
You throw me a glance and I saw tears in your eyes.
I wanted to ask why and wish to make you stay for a while.
But you walked briskly, so I followed silently confused with a sigh
2
Looking at your footprints as the sea waves washed it away from my sight,
I stopped and looked up, and oh, I lost your track.
I looked around but you were nowhere to found.
I run and run oh baby where you are gone.
I stumbled, fall, and feel the pain in my mind.
All of the sudden I woke up from sleep, feeling missed, and feeling scared.
3
I sit down trying to convinced myself you are real,
I stood up; walked towards my window and stare the heaven.
There you are looking down from the sky with smile on your lips.
I stretched my hand to touch your face but then again you fade.
Are you real or you just merely a dream?
If so, I wish my nights would never end and be with you forever.
This is my original composition.
Honestly, this is not the best poem for me.
I have few more original creation,better than this one.
Did you write this poem by yourselves or copied from others?i liked it very much
What would you feel after reading such comment dear mylotters?[i][/i]
this is my reaction after reading the comment 
jaiho®
11-28-2011 6:15pm PT
jaiho®
11-28-2011 6:15pm PT3 people like this
13 responses
I have noted some of your written poems and i can say that you have indeed the making of a good poet. Keep it up!
@dpk262006 (58679)
• Delhi, India
28 Nov 11
HI Jai!
I know that you are a wonderful poetess and you write beautifully, whatever you write.
I don't like to ask these kind of questions to anyone - "have you written this poem". These kinds of questions look very offending to me and I refrain from asking.
I don't like to ask these kind of questions to anyone - "have you written this poem". These kinds of questions look very offending to me and I refrain from asking. 
@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
28 Nov 11
I am sure you will never ask me such question dear 
you're the last person to ever ask me 
you're the last person to ever ask me 
@vijayanths (7877)
• India
28 Nov 11
You have written this poem so nicely dear sister jai, people think it must be a creation by a great poet. There is feeling,there is romance, there is honesty and there is also innocence in this lovely love poem. Good job dear.
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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
28 Nov 11
Thanks a lot dear anna 
Well, as expected from a big brother 
Well, as expected from a big brother 
@Rosa26 (2616)
• United States
28 Nov 11
That is a beautiful poem you area real artist,I encourage you to continue writing as nice poems.
Yes! when I was a teenager I used to write poems and I wrote a lot of in a notebook that I dedicated just for my poems,I used to draw a lot and desing my own clothes, I love it, I was so inlove and wanted to express my feelings to the world by poems and looking good by my designs.
Yes! when I was a teenager I used to write poems and I wrote a lot of in a notebook that I dedicated just for my poems,I used to draw a lot and desing my own clothes, I love it, I was so inlove and wanted to express my feelings to the world by poems and looking good by my designs.2 people like this
@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
28 Nov 11
Thanks for the appreciation dear
This is one of the best poem I ever composed...as per my choice
http://authspot.com/poetry/wild-confession/
This is one of the best poem I ever composed...as per my choice
http://authspot.com/poetry/wild-confession/
@ardoy0731 (7308)
• Philippines
28 Nov 11
I like reading poems caused it tell lots of emotions just like in the songs.
Never been tried to write a poem but I do always make a poem in my mind when ever I'm happy,inspire or emotional but never try to write it down.
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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
28 Nov 11
Oh,why not write it down?
It's nice to write poem and express what we feel thru writing 
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
29 Nov 11
hi jaiho you my dear are a very tal ented lady . I fouond myself pic picturingyou looking up at the sky,walking on the sand, sad and wishing oh my. I found myself wondering if my deceased husband looks down from heaven where hes been teasing others and laughing and ever watches me. oh I do have a vivid imagination,I like the reaction you
\gave after reading the comment. shame on him or her.I would have felt the same way only like this 
Shame on me.
Shame on me.1 person likes this
@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
29 Nov 11
dear Hatley,
Thanks a lot for the appreciation ma'm
Your imagination is great and I am sure you can write a good poem from it
Your imagination is great and I am sure you can write a good poem from it 
@ladym33 (10978)
• United States
5 Dec 11
That is a very nice poem, but that person was pretty rude for leaving that kind of comment. I think my reaction would have been the same as your like, "Really?" Then "I can't believe that person said that to me." Of course it would not be smart to put someone else's poem on the internet. Don't worry about that person. You did a nice job and wrote and shared a nice poem.
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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
5 Dec 11
hello ladym,
Thanks for your comment :)
I did feel hurt, yah, it's not smart to copy paste someone's work and claimed to be ours.
Not to mention that the writing where I posted this poem never accept plagiarized postings.
So,I was kind of "duh" how can a member respond like that when he/she knows the sites policy and rules. :x
@starsailover (7829)
• Mexico
5 Dec 11
Hi Jaiho: I remembered I loved writing poems and sometimes people don't believ I was the person who was writing the poems. I felt good at some point because this means that people consider that these poems were too good but at the same time I felt a little bit offended because they were trying to tell me that I was copying or maybe they think I was not wise enough to write my own poems being original and do a good job.
ALVARO
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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
6 Dec 11
hello Alvaro,
It hurts than an insult...yes,maybe people do not believe or don't have faith that they doubted our works...so sad
@bhabycatch013 (9150)
• Philippines
5 Dec 11
hi jai,
Well I do write poem but I am not good on it that was long time ago
And don't have plan to make another one.
thanks for sharing this
it is so nice
love yah!
@ravisivan (14082)
• India
28 Nov 11
jaiho: If the same comment is made by a person we meet in eprson we may feel bad. But online -- such comments are to be expected and should not be taken too seriously.
The poem has come out very well. keep it up. If we know that we have written it ourselves that is sufficient.
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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
28 Nov 11
Thanks for these kind words ravi and honestly, I just feel a bit pinch and "ouch" - oh my- that's my original creation and never copied from somewhere else
@nezavisima (7408)
• Bulgaria
28 Nov 11
I like copying and personal poems.
I think both things are good.
I still like a friend.
poems show us our soul if we write it we show our feelings and if someone copies also shows what we like.
Thanks for this discussion.
nice day!
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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
28 Nov 11
I like your comment dear.
Yes, when someone copied our work/s
it means..it is appreciated
@enelym001 (8322)
• Philippines
30 Nov 11
Well I would feel a little offended too. But then when the person included those last lines, I think that person is just so curious whether it was copied or not. Maybe because that commenter cannot even make his/her own poem or blog
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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
30 Nov 11
Honestly,I feel a bit hurt like "ouch" hehehe...
Uhmn,it's expected anyway, since a lot of bloggers cannot make their own/or copied from the net and claimed it is their very own.
