A JJ Sort of Post - And Then There Were Seven!
By Judy Evans
@JudyEv (382412)
Rockingham, Australia
December 13, 2016 10:15pm CST
Donnybrook, Western Australia, now has a local radio station. This has given local writers the chance to have their stories and poems broadcast over the air. I thought I'd share this one with you. I don't know if they'll use it but perhaps they will.
And Then There Were Seven
The hunter slid behind a tree. Up ahead, he'd spotted a deer nibbling on a branch. He eased a cartridge into the breach, cocked the gun and lifted it to his shoulder. Then he ever so slowly peered round the trunk of the tree, aimed just below the deer's left ear and squeezed the trigger. His senses thrilled to the smell of gunpowder and he watched the deer crumple to the snow, its blood staining a bright red patch.
He was amazed to see a second deer near the first; its head high but seemingly unafraid.
Shaking with excitement, he eased another cartridge into the gun, cocked it and dropped the second deer neatly beside its mate.
A cough and the crack of a branch sent him back behind his tree. He hadn't noticed anyone around. He froze and waited. There was another cough then a booming voice split the quiet air.
"Donner and Blitzen. Some b**stard's shot Cupid and Comet!'
The hunter tiptoed away keeping the tree between himself and a sad group of seven reindeer and Santa Claus.




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@AbbyGreenhill (45490)
• United States
14 Dec 16
no one better shoot those deer or Christmas is off.
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@AbbyGreenhill (45490)
• United States
14 Dec 16
@JudyEv I am going to count our deer today just to make sure they are all there !!!
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@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
14 Dec 16
I used to love what we called spot-lighting. We'd go out at night with a car and spot-light and shoot rabbits. But I grew out of it. :)



@hereandthere (45628)
• Philippines
14 Dec 16
i can understand vince's reaction. i never thought you had it in you! hahaha!
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@hereandthere (45628)
• Philippines
15 Dec 16
@JudyEv even that sweet as candy has a hidden center. 

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@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
15 Dec 16
@hereandthere Everyone has to break out of the mould occasionally! Or else maybe I just have everyone fooled and this is more the 'real me'. 

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@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
14 Dec 16
The lady looking after the broadcast stories has been in our writing group for a few years now but she hasn't heard this one. Each of the past 7 years, we've put out an anthology of our poems and stories. It is a simple volume and we only print 100+ each time (I think).
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@hereandthere (45628)
• Philippines
14 Dec 16
@JudyEv wow, you're a published author with a book every year!
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@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
14 Dec 16
@hereandthere It's very simply and cheaply done with a very limited distribution - family and friends! But I am in several other anthologies with a couple of stories that have won prizes.
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@PatZAnthony (14749)
• Charlotte, North Carolina
16 Dec 16
That would be a terrible thing, wouldn't it?
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@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
17 Dec 16
It would indeed. Luckily it's just a piece of fiction! :)


@nanette64 (20363)
• Fairfield, Texas
14 Dec 16
Oh crap!!! That's a big oops @JudyEv .
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@nanette64 (20363)
• Fairfield, Texas
15 Dec 16
@JudyEv Hopefully he peed on the tree. lol
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@MarymargII (12422)
• Toronto, Ontario
16 Dec 16
Now that was a sad end to Christmas Cheer- at least he didn't shoot Santa! ha! Good but sad story!!!
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@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
17 Dec 16
@MarymargII I hope that hunter had enough grace not to hang out his stocking!!
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@MarymargII (12422)
• Toronto, Ontario
17 Dec 16
@JudyEv Yes, he needs to replenish his pack now!
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@suziecat7 (3349)
• Asheville, North Carolina
15 Dec 16
Oh no - what a story. Santa sounds mad.
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@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
16 Dec 16
He'd just had two of his team annihilated! You'd be mad too! 

@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
14 Dec 16
I very much doubt there'll be any kids listening so it shouldn't be too traumatic. :)
@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
15 Dec 16
Vince has been recording it and every single he gets to the end and there's a bit pause and he says 'that's awful'. I never thought of doing away with the hunter. :)
@JudyEv (382412)
• Rockingham, Australia
14 Dec 16
Yes, I thought there were enough gooey Christmas stories around. :)
@teamfreak16 (43655)
• Denver, Colorado
14 Dec 16
That's funny. Wasn't expecting that!
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