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I don't know if it is allowed but.... email this discussion to a friend?

myLot reputation of 89/100. sanuanu (3920)   ranked 17 out of 11,870 in love2 months ago

Let's see how do you guys take it. I know it is boring but it came out when I saw a girl in my office. You all know that I can only love a girl but cn'at flirt with her hence I only wrote this rhyme.

You are right, I have not proposed to her and to make the matter worse, these days I am not talking to her also!

So, here is the rhyme. It is written by me, I know it is borng but what are friends for... LOL!

Let's see how it goes
When I watched you first day
you were the only I wanted to say hi
As your eyes locked at me
your smile was obviously killing me
your words were like flowers
yes you are the most beautiful girl
you gave me the reason to smile
whenever I am sad
I think about you and all the sorrows are dead
Let's see when I can propose to you
so that I can be the happiest guy in the world
let's see!!!

 
 
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tags:  poem, love, rhyme, flirt, love poems
 
1. myLot reputation of 98/100. zed_k4 (4649)   ranked 95 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

That's a very nice poem, sanuanu. I'm sure if she manages to listen to the poem, she'll smile heartily.. w00tw00t

Flirting with poem; that's new...I like it.. thumbup


myLot reputation of 89/100. sanuanu (3920)   ranked 17 out of 11,870 in love  2 months ago

Some way or another, this poem is still with my hands and I don't know when it will be in her hands or will it really go there!:-(


myLot reputation of 98/100. zed_k4 (4649)   ranked 95 out of 11,870 in love  2 months ago

Then mail it, bro... go for it!w00t
You never know if you don't try; who knows, she likes you too..

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2. cuteafsal (73)   ranked 1,948 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

Your poem's not bad.. But i gotta tell you that some girls might just take it as a very nice joke. So try to give the poem as joke or in a funny mood. Try to be more friendly with her before giving out the poem.

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3. myLot reputation of 88/100. hireshd (351)   ranked 186 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

Hey this is a nice poem and surely if you read it for her she is sure to talk with you from there onwards.
Dont keep your creation just with you expose her with such creations of yours in front of her.

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4. myLot reputation of 99/100. Aliceinwebland (5097)   ranked 1,752 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

hiya sanu!

Why are you not talking to her? If it's because you are shy, why not give her the poem?... It's really good and might break the ice. thumbup

Alice happy


myLot reputation of 89/100. sanuanu (3920)   ranked 17 out of 11,870 in love  2 months ago

I am really really shy or you might say that I am not that brave.

Just read the discussion which I have started with the title "What happened before I wrote a poem!" and you could come to know what was the reason behind it....

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5. myLot reputation of 100/100. paula27661 (5415)   ranked 894 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

Hello sanuanu! How are you doing? Why are you not talking to this girl? I like the poem and I’m sure she will too but you should make some kind of social contact with her and ask her out to dinner or something, then you could give her the poem along with a red rose...Good luck, my friend it sounds like you are really keen on her so, all the best... happy


myLot reputation of 89/100. sanuanu (3920)   ranked 17 out of 11,870 in love  2 months ago

Hi paulla! I am fine, how are you?

For the second question you have to read the next discussion with the title "What happened before I wrote a poem!" discussed by me just after this discussion. Sorry, I am giving a little hard work to know the answers!

Once you will read that discussion you would understand that why have I written this poem! Trust me, now it is more important for me to say sorry to her rather than proposing her!

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6. myLot reputation of 99/100. getbrowser (1425)   ranked 145 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

You have written a great love poem.

As you have said above, She hit you right between the eyes the moment you see her. I guess you should be a shy boy. Now that you have been addicted to her, so you can write down the poem and send it to the girl. Imagine it, when she has read your love poem, she may be touched beyond words.

Wish you success. Happy myLotting!


myLot reputation of 89/100. sanuanu (3920)   ranked 17 out of 11,870 in love  2 months ago

Yes, not only shy but a little less brave(I don't know the opposite of brave) also. I have had many times when I could give it to her but ... let's see what happens tomorrow!

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7. myLot reputation of 98/100. danitykane (1069)   ranked 7,900 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

I think it's beautiful. wub I like the part "As your eyes locked at me your smile was obviously killing me" haha. It's good. For sure she'll appreciate it.

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8. myLot reputation of 97/100. moonchild1au (843)   ranked 7,913 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

That poem is very sweet...If a guy wrote something like that for me, it would definately put a smile on my face.

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9. myLot reputation of 100/100. JenInTN (3686)   ranked 1,545 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

It's great sanuanu! You have to talk to her though. I bet you guys will hit it off. Good luck!


myLot reputation of 89/100. sanuanu (3920)   ranked 17 out of 11,870 in love  2 months ago

Ah, hi jenny! Changed your avatar. is it you?

I don't think that I can be a good guy for her but all I want to do is to send this poem to her because 4 years ago, I wrote a poem to a girl and you won't belive she was literly crying when she was leaving India!


myLot reputation of 100/100. JenInTN (3686)   ranked 1,545 out of 11,870 in love  2 months ago

Yes..it is me..lol..Girls are often touched by good poetry. wink

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10. myLot reputation of 87/100. CathyLee2009 (285)   ranked 4,182 out of 11,870 in love   2 months ago

you wrote a poem for a girl!I think it can prove you are fallen love with her.
but wait,if the girl knew it,what would she think of it?Some girls can be touched buy such a romantic thing,while some others don't like this style,they like something more realistic,for example,flowers,presents,take part in parties and so on.So,it depends what style the girl belongs to,I think.Good luck!

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